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by valentine mokua
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Nairobi, undeniably, is the most beautiful city in Kenya which every one, right in mind, is looking forward to visit. The city itself is like a small heaven on earth, the cradle land of all the beauties of this life and some hidden treasures. Here, ...

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valentine mokua
Welcome all. I hope to hear from you about the story
Grace Waiga
Real definition of Nairobi city. Congrats
Barack Kungu
Nice one. I like your creativity.
Jesse Nkaga
Real experience of Nairobi if you visit it for the first time. Kudos bro
Kemunto Ondogo
Good one👌👌
Enock Ombaye
Awesome bro. Keep it up
Kelvin Wambua
Nice one. Real life in Nairobi.👏
Nellys Muturi
This is awesome. This is what happens in Nairobi. Congrats bro.👏
Parseen Hassan
It's called Kanairo. Where you are robbed without violence. Congrats. It's a nice story
Chritine Kariuki
Superb!
Easther Omondi
Awesome 👍.A true description of the city.Keep up👌.
Bonface Atambo
It's an interesting story based on the facts about the life of people in Nairobi. Nice one my brother. Keep it up
Junior Brians
Good work bro!
Valentine Moraa
What an interesting read! Keep it up
Mokua Valentine
This story should be read to all those who have not yet been to Nairobi. They can learn a lot. Kudos bro
Mary Stella
A true story about Nairobi. Very interesting.
Rael Kemunto
A good story to read
Morgan Orang'
Mokaya experienced a tough life in Nairobi. Well developed story. Keep it up
Virgian Mukami
Good story
Mary Muoki
I like the title "busybodies". You are going far my friend. Keep it up
Derius Mutengi
wow. Wow. Wow. This is awesome
Josphine Mulei
Kudos👌
solomon mawira
My first time in the city. I had almost a similar experience to that of Mokaya. Hongera sana Mokua
Noah Kipkorir
I love the story. Congratulations!
Laetitia Kemunto
You have a talent vale. Keep it up
Enock Moremi
This is awesome. Kudos
Edinah Mwamba
I like the story
Andrew Araka
So touching. True Story of the city
Mwanawima Hellen
Hongera sana Mokua. Utafika mbali.
Kepha Omae
Amazing! I just love it.
Jovine Kateiya
I love the story💯
Patrick Munene
Nice story
IREEN MAKENA
Congratulations vale.the story is awesome..I love your creativity.
Kendie Annabel
Pure truth about the city. You're doing it well bro
Mawira Mbuyia
Congrats
Love Mathenge
👏👏👏👏
Tain Tina
Awesome!. Keep it up bro
Lenity kagwiria
Have been waiting for your story. Congrats Vale
Linet Nesh
Well developed story. Keep it up
Tobias Winston
Very interesting story
Shen Mayaka
Nice story💕
Lewis Mwenda
I love your story Mr. Mokua...I recommend everyone to read it
Betty Kamanda
Kudos👌
Cletus Boraro
It an awesome descriptive story, nice work from the writer.
Joseph Mathenge
Great work bro.... True facts about the capital city.
Janevellah Omwenga
Congrats Vale. I love your story
Danson Abuya
This is Wonderful story
Edwin Karanja
Kudos. Keep writing such stories. You will go far
Titus Koech
This is interesting
Calex Wesonga
Very interesting story...keep it up
Samantha Wakhu
Good story. Kudos
Miriam Nash
Congrats. I love the way you described what happens in the city.
Brian Muriithi
I love your creativity sir, congratulations Mr Mokua
Herman Momanyi
Nice story everyone should read.
Yususu Maalim
Congratulations Vale. Keep it up.
Joseph Nyangaresi
A wonderful story. Congrats
Eliza Makori
The city has a lot to offer. I enjoyed reading your story especially when Mokaya arrived in the city.. Well described.keep it up
Franciscah Monyenye
Good story
Hubert Obuya
A true story about the city. Very interesting.
Virginia Wambua
Congratulations Mr. Mokua, it's a nice story
Felix Macharia
I like the story.
Sharon Mokeira
Superb... I like your stories. Keep writing more stories. I promise you my support. Congrats Vale
Karis Jackie
Wonderful, just right., and relatable
Winnie Muendi
I never knew that you can write such a nice story...congrats
Jovine Kateiya
Fantastic.👏
Anthony Mutunga
Good story👍
selestine Monyangi
Life in the city is well defined here. Congrats bro
John Ogamba
The story is awesome 👍
Christine Kachama
Exactly; people want to find the hidden treasures and make it in life.
Sarah Kainga
Nice one.keep it up dear...
Jane Mburu
Wonderful
Mwenda Njeru
Iko fiti!!👍
Anthony Maina
This just one of a spectacular story especially written by one of our own Kenyans.Quite informative and amaizing.
Joy Cherotich
Awesome,,I enjoyed reading the story,,it's a beautiful one .✨✨
Kenrodgers Murithi
The best story read
Beatrice Kiragu
The story is so amazing 👍👍👍
BREDA GAKII
Wonderfully,the creativity is just awesome 👍
Samuel kiarie
With my passion on stories,I give my appreciation to story and a nice to have ever read.
Kimoi Cheru
wow, a great story indeed, I love it!#Bravo😘🙏
Kelvin Kipngetich
Wow,,,,such a great idea,,,indeed i love,,,it,,,keep it up,#bravo
Ambrose Maina
Nairobi dongee. Kudos💪🏾
Christine Wachiye
Great story 👌
Bentarose Mumbi
The story is good
Caron Chepkoech
Wow nice story
Evelyn Wanja
Nice story
Auleria Khisa
Bravo.👏👏
Johnson Muithya
It's Called Nairoberry. I like your story byta keep it up
Ayub Ojwang
Splendid! Keep writing bro
Mokua Francis
It's a nice story namesake. Keep it up
Lamech Mosoti
A story everyone can enjoy reading. Congrats 👏
Dolphine Nyankari
Good story.
Edward Mokaya
Amazing Story. 💯
Manu Manu
Kongole kaka, umaarufu wa uandishi unao kweli. Awesome 👍👌👍
Duncan Ndunda
Good work bro
Maria Maria
Nice story. Kudos
Agnes Mwamba
Congratulations son. You will go far. Keep writing more and more stories
Erick Nyarieko
Kudos bro. It's an amazing story
Timothy Bosire
I like your story. I pity Mokaya😂anyway congrats bro
Raphael Akunga
Great work bro.... True facts about the capital city.
Joseph Asiago
The city where no one to Trust. A good story indeed👏👏👏
Magdalene Gesare
Did Mokaya succeed in retriving his documents? Did he got job finally? You're creative. Keep it up bro.
Damackline Nyakundi
Wow-what a good story I had the same experience when I went to Nairobi keep up with the good work
Doris Nyaboke
💯true. I like your story. Talks about the real city
Simon Victor
Good👍
Munene Samuel
Amazing bro! Kanairo real life experience.
Geoffrey Muriira
Awesome story. Love it
Viola Kirwa
Very interesting, I like the creativity. Keep it up brother
Mary Wange
You have got an interesting story here congrats dear
Cyntia Arubia
Good story here by Vale... Hongera sana
Concepter Nyangau
Great creativity.congrats
Christine Musyoka
Nice story
Milcah Wanyama
Nice story. 👏👏
Marcos Maina
Awesome story. Keep it up
Angwenyi Polycarp
Congrats bro
Chrisantus Mose
Yours stories are amazing. Congrats 👏
Ochieng Junior
I'm in love with your creativity
Wycklife Noti
👌👌👌
Lucie Wanja
Bravo,,,Waiting for more stories from you
Antonio Paulino
Kudos my friend.
Bilta Mwango
The best real short story ever read. Congrats
Eliud Ngugi
Wow. Nice one.
Harriet Nyambane
OMG, like i mean this is one of the best stories have ever read.. i mean it's amazing.. excellent work Valentine, please press on.. i love this
Elija Moenga
Good work bro
Felix Angwenyi
Wow. Kudos
Razik Omweri
The story talks about things that happens to you when you visit the city for the first time. So be careful at kanairo...congrats Mokua
Veronica Gesare
Congratulations. I have learnt something about the city. Visiting for the first time soon. I will be more careful.
Faith Muchagi
👏👏👏
Terry Kawira
I never knew the meaning of busy bodies... I now know...congratulations it's a nice story.
Enock Moseti
A story worthy sharing. Congrats
Naida Dorthy
🔥🔥🔥
Mercy Njoka
Nice one.
Julius Wanyonyi
It's a good story. Hongera sana
Deborah Abuga
Good one
Korir Jebet
I like the story... I wish you all the best in the competition.
Irene Mukami
❤💯
Josephine Jena
You left me with a lot of questions... a very interesting story
Josphat Baraza
Awesome story. Keep it up bro
Shem Marangu
Bravo... Wishing you the very best
Jane Kinya
Nice story🔥🔥🔥
Feline Mocheche
Awesome,,I enjoyed reading the story,
Dorothy Onwonga
It's seems so real. I love it❤
Martin Muriira
Kudos👏👏👏
Chrispine Oenga
Wonderful and relatable
Steven Nyabuto
A very interesting story
Lizzie Wanjiru
Amazing story. I love it. Congratulations
Nevin Nafula
It is such a nice story
Joshua Njuguna
Nice one
Beryl Nyatuga
I like the way your story talks about current issues in our big city. Keep it up
Timothy Mokogoti
Wow. A nice story
Caroline Moraa
Kudos
Shelly Kerubo
Reading your second story, brother I tell you, you're going far. Keep it up
Osiemo Osiemo
Very interesting story. Congrats
Gaudencia Kemuma
wow, a great story indeed
Felister Mutheu
A nice story for everyone to read.
Velimah Otieno
Love your story. Keep it up
Stephen Ndung'u
Wow. This is an amazing story
Agatha Jerop
The creativity of Valentine himself, keep it up
Mucui Martin
Congrats the story is awesome
Paul Kihara
Kudos...all the best in the competition
Virginia Mueni
Good work bro..
Charles Okioma
Good one
Celister Ondogo
This is an amazing story
Edith Ndua
Awesome 👍.A true description of the city.Keep up👌.
Naomi Mbithe
Awesome bro. Keep it up
Teresa Onwonga
Superb story
Nickson Abuya
A wonderful story. Congrats bro
Erick Mawera
Wow.wow. Amazing story I have read
Titus Mungei
Nice story read here.🔥🔥🔥keep it up
Asha otieno
A very interesting story. I think you are the best.... Keep it up
Precious Simiyu
Congratulations vale. the story is awesome..I love your creativity. Keep it up
Edward Kimathi
A good story indeed
Charles Muriithi
A good story bro...you have a talent. Keep it up
Pius Ndaro
Amazing
Dolcah Bosire
I like your story. Congrats
Silvia Nasimiyu
Once again Valentine you've done it. Always getting better and better, your stories. Nairobi can be so nasty and you captured that in your story so well. Congratulations!
Clinton Nyasani
The story seems to be so real...keep it up.
Shalon Kyalo
Good work bro
Justine Mose
Congrats bro. It's nice to read your story. Keep it up
Redenta Lomoni
🔥🔥🔥
Ronext Onsongo
Amazing story
Calester Kwamboka
Congrats son...I like the way you described the situation in the city in your story. You will go far. Keep it up.👏👏👏
Millicent Juma
Perfect description of the East African giant city- Nairobi city. Mokaya's encounter is just one among others in the city. I also have one I need narrate someday. Kudos bro🔥
Paul Gekanda
I enjoyed reading the story. Mokaya represents many citizens who visits the city for the first time... I was once in the same situation...congrats.
Doreen Gakii
Gook work Mr. Mokua. Keep it up
Brian Munene
Your pen never disappoints... Congrats bro. I admire your creativity
Mellen Omwoyo
Good story
Novie Kemmy
Congratulations...your story is good. All the best in the competition
Nevin Moraa
Nice story to read. The flow is good and everything. Congrats 👏
John Nyaga
I have read your story twice. Its nice to read again and again. Congrats
Lenity Ogamba
Awesome story. I will look for you to guide me to write mine. I like your creativity.
Josphat Machana
Good story bro. You have a talent. Keep it up. Waiting for more stories from you
Ernest Isaboke
Nice story
Caludia Mukami
Congrats dear. You keep improving every day. Keep the fire burning. Can't wait for the next story to read. You inspire me alot
Nicholus Ariga
👏👏👏good developed story. Mokaya represent many citizens who visited the city for the first time. Congrats bro
Grace Ragira
Awesome 👍.A true description of the city.Keep up👌.
Victor Nyandieka
Nice one. The best short story I have read. congrats
Dianaana Mwetu
👌👏🔥
Mellen Moraa
Nice one
Cecilia Wakhu
Good story
NICODEMUS WAMBUA
wonderful story. keep the spirit
purity ngoci
A very interesting story
Amos Nyagaka
Superb story
Austine Ondieki
Kudos bro
Jacinta Kerubo
Wow,,keep it up
EVANS ODHIAMBO
Nice one please also read mine, MYSTERIOUS WISDOM
Dominic Ngetich
👌👌👌
Emily Makena
Nice one
Vane Kendi
Kudos bro
Maureen Kwamboka
Awesome
Seth Omonywa
Nice story bro
Kalvin Mabonza
👌👌👌
marther masista
good
johnkeen wambugu
wow.
sharon wangeri
This is awesome. This is what happens in Nairobi. Congrats bro.👏
evah wangari
Its called Kanairo. Nairobbery. a true story defining it. keep it up
vincent rioba
This story should be read to all those who have not yet been to Nairobi. They can learn a lot. Kudos bro
Tony kethaka
kudos
Sheillah Chumba
incredible
maurice gitari
Mokaya experienced a tough life in Nairobi. Well developed story
vicky muthomi
love the story. its a true definition of Nairobbery
Nathan nyaga
Splendid! Keep writing bro
olive njura
A good story to read
Lerapo Francis
Good story
Rubeun Ighuna
Amazing! I just love it.
George mburu
Congrats Vale. I love your story
Muvea Patrick
Awesome
Rodgers Gekara
Kudos👌
brain ngota
A true story about Nairobi. Very interesting
Joy Mwenda
I like your story. I pity Mokaya😂anyway congrats bro
Linda Achieng
Kudos bro. It's an amazing story
lydia Moraa
wow
Denis Mwiti
congrats. its a nice story
Suzy Nekesa
Good one👌👌
Kelvin Ochieng
Kudos bro
Adan Hassan
A story worthy sharing. Congrats
gladwell mwende
good story
Pamela Atieno
Awesome 👍.A true description of the city.Keep up👌
Faith Makena
A true story about Nairobi. Very interesting
Lucy Masengo
keep it up bro
Shalet Kibet
Good story
Felix Ombunga
good one
Ruth Omae
keep writing bro. you are going far
Calvin Kimani
Its called Nairobbery. kudos
Ruth Ruguru
What an interesting read! Keep it up
Bryan Abuka
congrats
Elias Kinoti
A story everyone can enjoy reading. Congrats 👏
Sheila Cheptoo
Awesome!. Keep it up bro
Eric Omondi
nice story
Dalmas Ouama
Nice story bro. Keep it up

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