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ALL REVIEWS:
Juma Amutabi
Must read for all
Carol Mbaika
It's well crafted and imaginative . I loved the choice of characters names , very creative.
Felix Odhiambo
The picturesque while reading this is excellent,the choice of names is just wonderful.
The protest scene keeps the reader anticipating,which of course is commendable.
Very rich vocabulary.
Ivan Kipto
Great creativity with uniqueness no one expected .Add more curiosity and your there💯👏👌
Felix Kiprono
It's a very creative and descriptive short story . The reader can picture the events and put themselves in the moral dilema of the situation. creative ending. 10/10
Rosemary Achillah
Interesting piece, well articulated!
john Kamau
interesting piece of art,wow.
Brightone Mbuthia
Wowwwww
Joy Monyei
10/10
Abel Sellasie
Nice work.It's all about the creativity 💯
Barbara Shikuku
Oh wow! What a plot twist! I hope Ketepa gets released in part two. It also offers solutions. I enjoyed this💯
Lemi Tereka
The war of change, and the war on change has been debated very well in this story. All sides have been represented in this story, not watering down the effect of any. The story was very easy to follow and the lessons very easy to pull out. An achievement only authors like Juma could bring out.
Lomole Jonathan
a stunning work of art to say the least
Gordon Owino
amazing stuff
BERYL BERYL
The story is quite interesting and captivating.l must say that one is thrilled by the story with how you vividly portray the plot , characters etc
John Paul
So good!!!
Vivian Alivitsa
I loved the creativity
Stan Brad
10/10
Shirley Atieno
🌟.
Terily Akello
❤️.
Peter Wafula
Well crafted!
Hillary Murimi
A very creative story. I love the character names and the vivid descriptions of the scenes. 10/10. 🔥😤
Ryan Kariuki
Superb creativity
Zack Stark
Amazing works
Neema Favour
This is superb!
ruth achillah
Well crafted. Such a vivid story. I wish Ketepa a good ending.
Eric Achillah
Good read. I like your craft...well articulated
Betty Keya
Vivid descriptions. rich vocabulary, captures all senses. A good read.
Brenda Kavere
eye catching! Such a good read!
Shaun M Ndasowa
Amazing
Edna Lusweti
A great read. Very well written.
Blu Gallagher
Well written creativeness of the story is very well thought
Gift Ikhavi
Awesome piece of work
Gloria Juma
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Eliza Sheek
Vivid description,I felt as if I became a character myself.I loved every part of this breath taking piece.
Drew Green
Great work!
Jonah Greene
awesome work Gloria!
Adria Gilmore
loved it...waiting on part 2!
Scolastica Mbulishe
A wonderful story
Petronilla Andiba Otuya
What a wonderful story.
susy barazaa
Well scripted... The choice of characters too👌
Uncle Manou
Ketepa was my best
Form Muhimu
Very impressive script.
Shikusa Baba
Wow Glo
Zawadi Aluha
Allows one to be introspective about what's to come with the new technology
Manu Bryce
Captivating
James Kibora
Not a fan of reading,but this is clearly worth reading all day, great work
Phoebe Norah
Character names!!! 10/10
Keith Jerome
Such a thought-provoking and imaginative piece of work.
The vivid imagery and well-developed characters kept me glued to my screen and the way you've woven together elements of technology and human impact is both timely and compelling.
Dominic Murithi
Wow,,,the plot is awesome,,the vocabularies are on another level,I even had to get a dictionary for some of them 🤭🫡
Anne Mbwabi
Woow,Interesting piece.
Matilda Nyawanga
Good work
Victoria Ndila
I love love this!!!!!
Kennedy Achillah
Fluid well-thought story, pertinent to current affairs.
Sakwa Johnstone
This is an amazing piece ❤️
Vwamura Juliet
Great script
Ima Amutabi
amazing
zawadi Miller
mind blowing
vanson mike
10/10
mike john
creative story
wanjiku kate
liked jani character
jake wams
must read
jane njanja
5 stars
Grace Muiruri
An interesting piece indeed
Elizabeth Oduor
100%
Lydiah Waswa
Wow
Hazel Magero
Interesting
Resa pamela
Woooooow
Jill Pendo
Wonderful
Doro Lucy
Interesting
Casey Achillah
Good read on. Eye opener on the advent of technology and it's challenges.
Anne Peart
I loved it
Purity Vihenda
❤️❤️
Ifeoma Todd
This is great !
Faith Andia
Nice
Alma Hinton
I like
Travis Geene
Nice one
Amutabi Juma
❤️❤️
Kimei Felix
Very nice
Jescinta Miroyo
I love this one soo much
Emmanuel Sultahn
The choice of characters is lit
Blake Manu
❤️❤️
Stewart Greyjoy
Amazing Glo❤️❤️❤️
Jason Shikuku
❤️❤️❤️
Agnes Kawira
Ketepa ❤️❤️❤️
Carl Tundo
Nice
Jaden pinketh
C'est Formidable !
Daphene Minayo
A battle
Elvin Ongori
I loved the ending
fiopl pilip
yes,I love Ketepa...all the best to my brother...hoping for part 2
Esperancer Wanjiku
Classic
Dj Lyta
Great talent!!
Diana Bahati
Andorra loves it
Kaitlyn Monae
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Charity Matunda
Amazing
Zack William
Very captivating
Polo Marcs
1000%
Cliff Odera
5/5
Issa Dirsk
Awesome work ,Well Elucidated !
Devin Wise
Loved every part of it
Kui Nicki
👌👌
Bunny Wailer
Yea man
Brenda Mayah
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Scott Larry
😎❤️
Faith Mideva
❤️❤️❤️
Gifted favor
Indeed a must read
Bosss Babes
Gifted Author!
Zion Train
100
TJ Rowland
Top tier read as always, the Author just never misses !!!
Bob Stark
Let's do it again
Nathan vonne
I loved every part of it.
Maina This Maina That
😍❤️
Kim Jon
Wow
Sis Mary
Incredible
Guest Speaker
👌👌
Val Hg
Wow
Glo Rehz
Wow
Mj Gg
Wow
Lilliyanne Merth
Great
Fydelle Castellammare
👏👏👏hongera
Finley Maranga
Such an interesting read. Well crafted story that tactfully takes the reader into the plight of families that depend on such menial jobs.
Oyamo Richard
Good story
Bob Kamau
The flow and uniqueness of it is just, chef's kiss...
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