by EDELQUIN RUTH
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The story is about a middle-aged teacher in Kenya who is struggling with various challenges, including financial difficulties, family responsibilities, and societal pressures. The story touches on a wide range of issues, including the struggles of ...

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Raphael Mureti
A beautiful story,very captivating
EDELQUIN RUTH
Did not see that coming.i love it
KAKAI SYLVANUS
It captivates me the way the author has this article married with current affairs in real scenario's in Kenya. One splendid article 👏
June Akola
The issues highlighted here have a lot of weight. This is a nice story overall.
Kellynorah Anyango
Very interesting story, the author has brought out current incidents happening in Kenya. Very nice 👏👏👏
Nkatha Muriki
Mind-blowing. The writer know how to capture the attention of a reader and leaves a want to read the next word/ sentence. Bravo 👏
mariam Nancil
Love it
Sylvia onsarigo
Excellent Very interesting story. Creativity at it's peak
Felix Kopiyo
Nice flow. Good story. Keep it up😘😘
BRIAN KIPCHUMBA
I love the fact that the author incorporates current affairs into the story
Gabriela Kalekye
Love the grammar and choice of words
Dickens Tony
Wonderful story choice, ❤️
Purity Mongi'na
I love this..very captivating…I love the storyline…
D W Lutomia
Captivating!
Susan Nabwire
Waau a moving piece,long to read further.
Hilda Nyakio
Nice work👌
Irene Cherop
A beautiful story
Bevian Alycent
Excellent 👍
mercy chepkurui
Love it
Brian Ogutu
Superb
Hansi Kraus
Talent showcased in words, great piece Quin
Elijah Mwangi
Very interesting story and also captivating
OUMA PHILIP
Incredible
Benjamin Odhiambo
Good work edel
Mark Okingo
I like how she brings out the current situation in Kenya creatively 👍
Derick Onguto
Awesome 😎
Gerald Mwangi
Incredible,
Cyril Peter
The author's passion for the topic shines through in every paragraph. I was thoroughly engaged and learned so much from this article. Keep up the good work Edel,
Mwangi Kelvin
It's well-researched, well-written, and incredibly captivating❤💯
Salome Adhiambo
This is sooo good💥👏damn
Lucy Odeko
Loved it
samwel cheloti
Amazing 😍
Favour Wekulo
Very interesting story with a nice flow which makes it easy to comprehend and the way the issues are highlighted is just amaizing .
Edwin Moses
Good work!!
Moses Njuguna
I love her work!! ❤
Kimutai Dennis
Its a wonderful piece,i love the creative use of words
LINDA NANZALA
Talent in words
kingpin eliud
Captivating!!
Wangamati jnr Chief
This is a wonderful piece!!
James Gitau
Incredible!!
Peterson Wagura
Good and creative use of words!!
Joyline NECHESA
Splendid!!a real definition of talent, keep it up!!
lucy Nyajowi
Nice
Hazel Archy
I love this
Benardette Wanjiru
Talent
David Angima
Wonderful work!
Fred Masese
Addressing current issues in the most creative way,this should go viral!!
Eric Gitonga
Love it!!
Tyson Mukala
Amazing 😍
eustus muchina
I love her work!!
Klein mark
so creative!!
wycliffe otsieno
This is the literary expression we should appreciate in this century!!
Elias Mwandima
art❤️
kaingu Konde
I love how she adresses the issues creatively
denis mokaya
This is a wonderful piece
Ignatius Peter
I always long to read your work
Bigshader Makau
Nice one!!
ABUNGA NYABENA
This is pure talent!!
BENJAMIN CHILANGO
Expression of pure literature to address current issues
Winstone Ouma
This is great!!!
NYAMIAKA BRIAN
Wonderful!!
Reeh mark
great!!
VINCENT namwamba
good work!!
Smith wonit
kenya needs more production of these
Bruce Benson
Nice text!!
Brian Mwango
I love reading such creative stories
Arsen Prince
Amazing story!
Eugine Juma
Captivating story!
Eugine Omondi
This is a mind blowing story, keep up!
Joanes Omondi
Kuddos!!
OKWERO Johh
Incredible
Naom Monyenche
Interesting,
Alphonce Omuya
Literature ✨
Brenda MONYENCHE
Good story, keep up!
ELVIS ODHIAMBO
Good work!!
derrick liech
Wonderful!!
Fabian Lesiamon
Good work!!
Rebecca Nyamoita
Amazing 😍
Mercy MORAA
Superb👍
Ariana Kerubo
I loved it, keep up!!
Cliff Mate
Nice story 👏👏
SAYIA MATEYA
Wonderful!!
jeremiah maina
Captivating story, keep up!!
MAINA MUKURURO
Amazing, I loved the piece!
Emmanuel Odhiambo
Splendid!!
Joseph Otieno
Wonderful!!
Nickson Chimasia
Good work!!
James NICKSON
Amazing
Kijana Wamalwa
Very captivating!
Maxwell Mawira
Beautiful story!
MUGAMBI MAWIRA
Good work?
KELVIN KORIR
This is so great!!
victor kibet kigen
Wonderful story to read
Anthony Wambua
Loved it
Brian Marwa
Captivating!!
GLADYS MONYENYE
Loved it!
Victor Barnabas
So nice
MONYENYE Mary
Beautiful story! Keep it up
Vincent Barry
Amazing!!
Victor Maxwel
Nice!!/
Shadrack Kemboi
Rumination👌
Sam Samson
Captivating!!
kileon onditi
This is so wonderful
OLELA ONDITI
Kuddos👏
aston boby
Wonderful 😊
Muthuri Mark
Wonderful, piece
Calistus Adika
Great 😃
Mwangi Natalie
Good work kudos
Emmanuel Kamwalo
Captivating!!😊
Jeremiah Mutahi
Great!!
Munene James
KTDA should see this! Beautiful work,
Achieng Gladys
10 on a 10-point scale
Aron Korir
This is so interesting!!
EVANSON KIPKOECH
Interesting plot twist at the end
Ayub Mungai
The plot twist at the end is very unexpected
Mutua Mutava
This is so interesting
KELVIN MUTAVA
Interesting!!
George Ochieng
Wonderful!!
Noah Kelles
Captivating!!
George Malowa
So interesting
Kibaki Omolo
Wonderful 👌
Kibagendi Denis
Creativity at it's peak
DENIS OMOLO
Captivating!!
dennoh echesa
Nice !!
Joyce Magobe
This is wonderful!!
ONYANGO OMONDI
Relatable
Dzuya Kenny
Mashallaah
Barry Emmanuel
its very interesting
Moses Gitau
Creative
Martin Kamau
This is very communicative
cenivya masinde
Very interesting, would like to read a sequel
Wangui Mjimba
This level of creativity is Wonder
Ngare Praisson
I love the language the author uses to express the story, simple yet complicated❤️
Peter JAMES
Very attention grabbing
Jackson Koech
Interesting 🔥
Mafumba Rafuu
Very captivating
james kyalo
A very wonderful story
dennis jacob
Captivating!!
Sultan Khalifa
Wonderful!!
Joan Sultan
Well characterised
Damian Jacob
Wonderful❤️
Benjamin Kioko
Interesting
Moses Murunga
Very captivating
Walter Kepha
Very captivating
Walter Olieti
Wonderful
Music Enthisiast
Fantastic
Liesa Marie
An interesting read
BRIAN ESILAN
Very interesting
George Esilan
Gpt caught up in it for a while
Brandon Mayabi
Wonderful 😊
kasaine sane
the issues adressed in this stpry are of so much weight
COLLINS INGULU
Wonderful
COLLINS Chibukosia
Fascinating
Brian nyabeda
A very interesting read❤️
byron ouma
Show me a story more perfect
BYRON OTIENO
Interesting
Charles Kimemia
Very captivating
Bigman Bazu
Interesting
John Mugi
Very interesting
John Waitara
Talent
Abdirahman Hussein
Wonderful 😘
kennedy muthiga
This is very good work
Erick Sironka
Interesting
Meshack Omondi
Wonderful
OTIENO Kevin
Nice piece
Hilda Kakai
Very interesting story. The author has captured the current situation in Kenya
Everlyne Sikuku
Wonderful job and very captivating
Julius Kaiga
The language level used in this story is just impeccable ❤️
James Maina
Nice work
Lucy Kibet
Her work is incredibly amazing
Calistus Atsango
A fascinating article
Stephen Sifuma
Interesting article 👌
steasha cyber
cool story i love it
monicah wambui
Lovely piece
mohammed shilingi maitha
Nice one👍
Tasha Monik
Amazing story
Rakim Speed
A very interesting piece👍
Mercy Mwangi
Loved it
Sharon Wairimu
Good story
Anthony Makeke
Fascinating
Denis Ondieki
Nice one❤️❤️
Diana Chebet
Captivating story
Lucy Mwangi
Excellent story
Mary Moraa
Creativity in words
Derick Onyango
Amazingwork
Beldine Auma
Fascinating
Oscar Koome
Good choices of words
Collins Wanyama
A thought provoking read♥️
Nurse James
Amazing story
Anasi Franklin
Wow!!
Frank Isaac
I loved it
Anasi Franklin
A lovely read
Brian Korir
I loved the story
Preston Imbwaga
An original and imaginative story, I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
Omondi Victor
Great!!
Oj Undersiege
Amazing
WAnted SYSTEM
Good story
Kelvin Kimanzi
A very beautiful story, I enjoyed the read
jeremy mwangi
Interesting
Tabitha Soo
An excellent masterpiece

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