Fr. Peter keeps gambling with every thing in his life from childhood until one time he is forced to gamble at casino a real dice rolling that makes him lose everything including his dignity.
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Isaboke Mbuthia
Such a bold story. Keep it up, Clare!
Dan Nixon
The story is compelling and well-crafted, with engaging twists that keep the reader hooked. While reading, I noticed similarities to another piece I once read particularly one involving a confession suggesting a nice blend of ideas or inspiration from other authors. Despite that, the narrative flows effectively. However, the rapid progression of events toward the climax creates a sense of confusion. The story builds up to a disastrous conclusion so quickly that it leaves the reader hanging, struggling to fully process or understand the unfolding chaos.
Meanwhile it's a Nice piece, looking forward to reading more stories from you, I'm your loyal subscriber!
bill BRUHDENCE
I like it
Ambrose Nyamboga
Good Work mkuu
Akinyi Lorine
Perfect
Quinter Awuor
Should be promoted to national libraries
Wycliffe Otieno
The story is giving ,worth a thousand words to explain.To the author please we need more stories like this.
Mary Ochieng
Such a nice piece. We need more . Congratulations keep the good job 👏
Brian Kipruto
This has just carried me to 7 different worlds at a go.🌟. An absolute best thing to read. The brewing and the crafting of this went through all perfect distillation process. Keep up.
Gorety Owenga
I love it we need more of this♥️♥️
Good work Clare.
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