story is told by an old man who travels to Nairobi from upcountry to collect his tea bonus. he ends being entangled with a prostitute that sees his unfortunate outcome.
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Dannie Ng'ang'a
Very interesting story
Ivy Burudi
Interesting
Mary Kamanthe
This was a beautiful read Richie👏🏾
MANZI Roger
This is a great story. The subtle imagery, and the ending makes it an impeccable one. Thank you for sharing.
Mercy Imbinda
The captivating story is exceptionally descriptive. The author's vivid imagery transported me to the story's setting, allowing me to feel every single sensation, taste the deliciously brewed chai, and even sense the characters' emotions. This level of detail made the narrative incredibly immersive, making it a truly enjoyable and memorable read. Kudos Oyamo.
Santana Macharia
Great story
Corn Elius
Woooohh, I wonder what happens next. Great story, I think I should start tea farming as well 😅
Mwykarly Crown
Keep it up
Bradley Situma
Nice twist. Big up Oyamo
Moraa Mengwa
Enjoyed every bit of it. End is quite heartbreaking though
Vivian Apondi
Your description is superb great work I love it
Victor Muyekwe
This was worth my time, so catchy💯
Abel kariuki
Good article, we look up to you with more of this.
cleve lihasi
I like the flow of the story, is there another part, maybe part B? I just feel like reading more of the story, good work the author.
Effie Apindi
Very creative. I've actually lived this entire story, and my chest still hurts because of the torture this mzee undergoes at the end. What happens next??
Ruth Muthoni
Beautiful. Keep up
Gadwill Odhiambo
A very compelling story indeed. Big up
Felicity Mudis
Talk about being hooked to the end.
This is really well written Oyamo.
Edgar Keng'ara
Thrilling!! I love the suspense at the end though😁👌🏽
Isaac Freelancer
Wow! What a captivating story. Creativity,flow and suspense on top notch
Kiptoo Michael
Captivating story, Richard.
Robert Iyan
Very creative !
Well put 👏
Charity Olekete
What a way to narrate! I can visualize all the events😂. Good work Richie👏
Kelvin Jason
Awesome story
Merina Lukai
The story is very interesting keep it up 👏👏
Daniel Nyundo
Good job
Kelvin Awajo
This is very interesting... wish it was even longer
Camila Eparis
Great read
Clive Ndemo
Great piece! Interesting.
Michael Ondiege Oluoch
I love how descriptive this is, you can easily create a mental picture and fit right into the characters' world. Superb!
Mary Wambui
Amazing
oliver ojiambo
Nice work 👍🏽
NELSON CHIBOLI NYONGESA
Great
faith oluoch
Ooh nooo!! A whorely war indeed! Good job Richard💥💥
Rita Sybil
Captivating and creative. Especially how you bring our both Nairobi Swahili and English
Stephen Sila
Interesting narration
Joseph Mukunzi
I admire the creativity here. It's a very interesting read keep up the good work
Mercy Kibet
Interesting story...
What happens next after mental hospital?
Victor Mutai
So interesting,I like the way you are splitting the words ~Oyamo Richard
dan Mulinge
And once again, "Joseph" ends up losing anyway. only that this "Joseph" of ours is apparently mad too.
A really interesting story this one.
emmanuel wafula
It's a fabulous story, very interesting
Joshua Mutuku
Loved it
Esther Maruti
What an incredible story.Great work Richie👏👏
Poetic Cyprian
Such an inspiration to the society. As they say,sanaa ni kioo cha jamii
Cyrus Achira
I stopped at "mobile phone" and laughed out loud 😂😂
ONDEGO IMBWAGA
Interesting
Rose Mbaika
Captivating and sizzling. Longing to read and know what happened later on.Keep it up Richard👏
Kevin Atea
Thank you,,such a beautifully crafted story
Paul Gatheru
Incredible Very captivating Story.
Oluoch Stephen
This is an interesting read.
Bildad Kariuki
I have enjoyed every bit of this read Oyamo, you are a promising writer
Maina Macharia
Interesting read.
Florence Mugure
This is very captivating, I enjoyed the twist too.
Neville Ouma
Quite the Kenyan feel indeed. From the envelope with blue and red stripes to the unmatched
taste of the tea, the tea farmer and inheritance...Every single bit of it is home.
I've loved the imagery for sure. I actually thought myself seated in the matatu with the half-ignorant passengers. All in all I felt for the old man.definitely a captivating one.Good work Oyamo 👍🏾
Mercy Nayainoi
This is beautiful. It's been long since I enjoyed a Kenyan based interesting read
Mohamed Salim
Kiingereza kimekolea. Napenda usimulizi
Hannah Gisemba
This is an interesting story.
Paul Mbugua
Captivating story this one. Glad to have read.
Faith Atieno
Beautifully crafted story
Kevin Otieno
This is an interesting read Oyamo. Keep it up
Brian Ochieng
I have loved every bit of this story. I pity the old man.
Grace Ambasa
This is an interesting read. All the best!
Agnes Aono
This story needs part two. I don't like the ending, haha!
Eunia Atieno
Thank for giving us a fabulous story. Keep inking.
Abnego Onyango
I like the gradualism of the story.
Abel Kariuki
This is an interesting read. Glad to have read
Harriet Afandi
I love this. You had me hooked from paragraph one.
Frank Were
This is good penmanship Oyamo. Keep up
Aisha Dahiye
This is an interesting read Oyamo
Alex Kimani
This is beautiful, I enjoyed every bit
Alfred Otieno
This is beautiful
Ali Mohamed
I love this writeup
Alice Mwikali
You are a superb writer
Ben Kioko
Richie , you are a talented writer.
MASIZA SINDIA
Such a caltivative and educative story. Keep the good work up
Allan Mulela
Interesting
Eva Choni
I have enjoyed the reading.
Allois Asembo
I have enjoyed this interesting read.
Alphonse Kimani
This is an interesting read.
Alvin Angode
I have enjoyed every part of this story, especially paragraph one.
Michael Mbogo
A very interesting story this one.
Angela Nadunga
This is interesting
Ann Naini
You are a good writer.
Anne Eboso
Interesting story.
Anwar Sadat
This is beautiful
Apio Moro
A good flashfiction. Keep up
Vivian Apondi
Nice story
Paul Arodi
You are a superb writer Oyamo.
Benard Baraka
This is beautifully crafted
Beatrice Khalivitsi
Good story
Bellah Muga
This is an interesting
Benard Mutua
Such a sad ending
Benson Kasuti
Enjoyed the read
Boniface Mwangi
This is a good story.
Alice Biata
This is interesting
Stephen Otieno
All the best
Billy Khaemba
This is a good story
Bonface Morara
All the best. Have enjoyed this read.
David Bongo
Nice story
Bradley Wasike
I have enjoyed every bit of this story.
Brian Simiyu
Good story
Bruce Munandi
A good story this one
Caleb Otieno
Interesting story, this one.
Oliver Ochieng
You are a good writer.
Boniface Mwanje
This is a good story
Cavin Ochieng
A good story
Cavin Odhiambo
Interesting
Charles Ogada
Nice story
Mercy Chelagat
I like the story
Victor Chesaina
Beautiful story
Christine Atieno
Nice
Benjamin Chumba
Interesting
Ann Mwende
Interesting story, keep up
Silas Kamau
Nice story.
Cynthia Muthoni
Interesting story
Abdalla Kasim
Good writeup
David Luka
Interesting read
Frank Ambundo
Good work
Almasi Eva
Well this was an enjoyable read. From the vivid descriptions to the pacing of the story, the angst to the humor in between. Your writing got me hooked from beginning to the end. I had a good time reading this. Good job. 👍
Agnes Ochoa
Interesting
Daisy Adhiambo
Nice
Lilian Wairimu
This is indeed a Kenyan story. Every aspect of it.
Dennis Akin
Keep writing. You are good at it
Paul Gatheru
awesome read you made Oyamo
Ann Manda
fire take it
Kevin Omolo
Interesting story
Nelson Kiprono
Beautiful story
alex wafula
good work
Desmond Wanyama
Nice
Dishon Kamau
I enjoyed this
Donald Mutua
Beautifully written
Dorcas Anyango
Nice
Sylvia njeri
awesome
Samuel Chetambe
You are a good student of literature
Kizito Justus
Good read
james karanja
good write up
lilian kimani
thank you, i enjoyed this
mark okello
intresting
Emmanuel Kiplagat
Good story
irene njeri
excellent
Mary Achieng
Oh, poor old man!
Haron kamau
oyamo kazi safi
Alvin omondi
superb work bro
Lydia Nyambura
Beautiful story
Laban Okemwa
Interesting read
Lucky saitabau
Beautiful writing i come for writing class
Alex Nyambane
Good work.
Keep it up!
Stephen Orago
I have enjoyed every bit of this.
Martin Shikuku
Good work
samantha wanjiru
great piece
Edith Lufume
Nice
Ephy Awuoro
Where does it go from here?
Ekiru James
This is a good story.
All the best!
Blessing ochieng
excellent excellent old times my schoolmate, good job
Lawrence Otieno
What a hurtful ending.
Elvis Kamau
Have enjoyed reading this. Keep writing.
Emelda Atieno
Interesting
grace onchiri
smart
Esther Wanjiku
Nice story this one
Esther Wayua
Interesting
Eudiah Njeri
I love the transitioning from each paragraph and the suspense at the end.
Eugene Omondi
Beautifully written
Faith apiyo
I love how you bring in the swahili
Baraka Faith
Keep up
Kageha Ta
Interesting
Faridah Fridah
Have enjoyed this, worth my time.
Fatma Abdala
Well written
Damaris syombua
all blessing on you on this mr.oyamo
Francis Mungai
This is an interesting read.
Elsie cheruto
excellent
Lucy wairimu
eeiiiiiish, i am a bit disappoint on the too soon ending wanted to continue
Frank Wanyama
Interesting story
Moses Muiruri
great read
isaac bosire
mwandishi oyamo nimependa
Clifford Nyongesa
Good work. All the best
Charles Gecaga
An Interesting story,
Sarah Acheing
Is there part 2? The suspense
George Wambua
Interesting read
daniel nyundo
I have enjoyed reading this. Thank you
Hassan Ibrahim
Kazi kuntu!
Ian Kariuki
Interesting
Isaac Wamalwa
Good work
Michael Mwenda
Good story
Ivy Atieno
Enjoyed reading this.
Lydia Jepkoech
Interesting story
Joan Nasimiyu
Interesting
Julius Ayuku
Interesting
June Achieng
Good story
Juma Salim
Have enjoyed 💯
Brian Otieno
Interesting read
Michael Kamau
Nice
Victor Otieno
Interesting
James Kuria
Interesting read
Lewis Simiyu
Have enjoyed this read
Joseph Kapinde
Good writeup 💯
Daniel Karugu
The suspense at the end
Caleb Kimani
I like this story
Catherine Oduor
This is well written Richie.
Derick Mwendwa
Good work👌
Collins Kavagi
Nice story, all the best
Kevin Mwangi
This is va good story.
Mary Kezia
Nice story, keep up
Khadija Osman
Good work 💯
Charles Kirivwa
Nice story
Philip Koech
A good story this one 💯
Lilian Akoth
I pity the old man 😔
Miriam Muthoni
Good writeup, 💯
Kevin Maina
Good work
Marion Wambui
Good story
Mark Okelo
Fabulous piece of writing
Mary Kiplagat
Good👌
Mary Kiragu
Beautiful story 😍
Victoria Nafula
Have enjoyed reading this
Mohammed Suleiman
Good story
Moses Kimani
This is a good Kenyan story.
Oliver Majale
Good story
Philip Muchiri
This is an interesting read.
Patrick Muthaura
This is hilarious yet worth pitying!
Abraham Mutonga
Glad to have read this
Charles Otuoma
Nice read💯
Paul Kiarie
Good story 💯
Mwanaisha Katana
I like the suspense and mixture of Swahili, keep up
Irene Mwende
Good work 👏
Brian Ndavi
Nice story
Evelyn Njoki
Loved every bit of this
Valentine Achieng
Good story
Fred Okuku
Good work Oyamo
Simon Kioko
This is interesting.
Lucy Achieng
This is a beautiful read.
Martha Nafula
Good story,
Peter Ochido
Interesting story
Benson Ateya
Well written story
Moureen Aketch
You are a good writer
Samson Odongo
Have enjoyed this. What a story
Timothy Njoroge
Nice
David Kimanthi
This is an awesome tale man , I laughed the whole way , but the suspence you leave us in aahh, you have to finish the story man .
Lucy Keshy
Poor man,escaping the frying pan only to end up in the fire. Catchy title, great descriptive writing and a captivating read.
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