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ALL REVIEWS:
Faith Njeri
Wow...what an interesting story... congratulations Naomi can't wait for more stories
Simon Mwangi
Lamu... Where love ends... Such thoughtful way of presenting the story. Waiting for more...
Rhosa Nyaga
I love the story line,and moral lesson too, Great piece Naomi
Patience Musyoka
I enjoyed reading this piece,it's an interesting one.
Naomi kimonye
Thank you so much as you purpose to read this amazing story.
Peter Kimani
Nice one
judy Christine
Love it
Jackline Kiarie
Lamu!!!! What a story!
Jackline Njeri
Amazing!!
Ann Wambui
I love the story
Nancy Wambui
Very creative writing
Daniel Ndiva
The best way to give a moral lesson
Kathleeen Kasuvu
The story is more than creativity. It's a reality
Ann Muthoni
I like the plot of the story....
Susan Kamau
I need to visit Lamu to see their culture
Ephraim Maloba
Good work!!!
Elias Mugambi
Love!!!!! A true definition of it is found here.
Samuel Bachiko
A great story
Okumu Khalifan
Mashallah!!
Kaila Mwakusema
It's a short story but with a big moral lesson
Arumba Hakim
I have read the two stories and i can confidently conclude that you're a talented writer. I hope the third one is almost!!!
Hassan Mtaita
What a story!!!
Korot Kevin
I like the story
Hemistone Oruko
We need more of such stories
Shilah Khandiye
A wonderful story
ann kimonye
oh my goodness, This story is so thrilling.
Tumusiime Patrick
A story worth reading
Ann Murea
Good work
Joy Kanyua
Love it
Henry Kimathi
loving this
julius muthomi
what a love!
phylis kanana
this story makes me want to visit lamu
ema ema
i salute the author
clara wanjiku
lamu here i come
Ndumba Ndumba
The story has taken me way back. Mission Lamu
Pascal Wambua
Amazing
Simon Kinyanjui
Wow!
This is a must read story to everyone guys.
Its awesome.
Yvette kathambi
huts off Naomi
Craig Oteyo
Tremendous!
Mary Murithi
What an incredible story
Martin Indongole
A very good story. I like it.
darq amber
awesome story
Immaculate Mithamo
Wow...I love the moral lesson...congratulations
Cynthia Mirio
Good plot i love your creativity
rossy vibes
one of my favourites to have read
Lynnette Wairimu
Good
mburu patricia
A fantastic story ...put me in my moods
Martha Mwai
Perfect
pauline darq
the story is wow..nicely done
monicah njoroge
the ending was amazingly wow
millicent mugo
nice ending
purity mungai
Nice story
Hellen Ndirangu
AMAZING STORY
Tracey Mathenge
can't wait for the next one..
jerky nikki
in love with the ending
grace njoki
awesome story''''
Blessing Maina
superb story
Agnes Wambui
Great piece indeed...
wachira murage
beautiful.....I love it
terry shexy
nice one
lissa nyash
wow thumbs up .....
june ngari
that was great i really loved it keep up
sylvia wachira
great work keep it up
christine wairigia
i was awed heart gripping
Liz Mwaa
nice one
lovely story so touching
Simon Mwangi kiama
supper great and captivating
susan nyambu
wow even better and great
peris muriithi
amazing
tiffany steph
gosh it was marvelous
vybe queen lornah
I could not fathom the turn of events well done
Joy Wambui
Nice
Morris Mutahi
Great
ALFRED NYAMWANGE
At first I wasn't getting it all until I find this intriguing bit... That Milele's marriage has to survive fake as it's at all costs... The cost of human life! Only Azizi weirdly does that...to prevent her husband's possible marriage to Milele in case she became single... Who has such warped thinking,of course, Azizi and I've a gut feeling she might break prison and actually execute her threats... What a story full of twists. Thanks Naomi.
Lucy Wanjiku
A very good piece here.
Simon Mbugua
A must read story
Ruth Njeri
The story is just a five star one... Kudos Naomi
Thomas Mbugua
True love will always win...
Daniel Mbugua
It is a good story
Douglas Douglas
Love it 😍
Erastus Kirimi
Well written
Danson Mutwiri
Love!
Nancy Munyi
Wow
Ngaruthi Simon
A good story
eric kirimi
you've taken me way back
gitonga muriithi
a good read
Doris Makena
This is the best story I have ever read
Nkatha Mwari
I'm proud of your creativity me sister.
John Ledunda
True love will always win.
nyongesa Mary
I like the story
Irene Juma
I remember Lamu!! It is well represented here
Irene Onyango
Good job
irene irene
a well written ficion
mercy ngetich
i miss the Lamu festivals
chep jep
Lamu has always been my favorite destination
njoki carol
mad love
dianne wanjala
aki mapenzi.
patience dw
things we do for love
ouma knight
mahaba moto moto
bro loringa
pitiful love
wanyama henry
jameni mapenzi
mary wambui
wow
jimmy bogonko
napenda
jim mbogo
a good read
josse ngumo
kudos
theuri mwangi
a well told love story
isaac thui
i love the twist
shirleen james
strange love
patric gichuru
an interesting story
mary kendi
l love your storie
millicent mungai
a nice read it is
mary wanjiku
i need a collection of your fictions
gichuru gichuru
its a classic
mary karwitha
jealousy and love. good work
niko okawa
nice job Naomi
wilson kosiom
i pity azizi
francis oywer
just perfect
maurice njuguna
amazing
mourice gik
A good read
Loise Nyawira
Keep it up Naomi
Eunice Wambui
I love everything about the story
Abdi Hulufo
Kazi nzuri
Millie Mungai
I like the story
Karoki Simon
Love is a beautiful and and painful at the same time
John Muthee
Wonderful
Theuri Muthee
Nice read
Sigika Sigika
I remember Lamu!!!!
Brose Zawadi
Well done
Sarah Ciku
Love!!!
Matilda Gakii
Love the creatively
Ciku Mbugua
Love will always win
Tur Mall
Not a reader of love stories, but this one, I love. Keep it up
Reasearc Gaze
Poor lover. Good read
Musimo Ghati
Good job
Nyandimo Wendy
English being your third or forth language, you are doing great. Can't wait to read your Swahili works
Mercy Njagi
Love is sweet but it can burn at time
beatrice ndiang'ui
a good read
jane eunice
things we do for love! keep it up Naomi.
joyce kanyiri
Amazing.....so proud to call you my Swahili teacher..🌹
Jeff Ethan
Keep it up .
An interesting story indeed
Chemchem Chemchem
Sasa umenileta nyumbani
Wangari Easter
Lamu 💕💕
Farwat Said
Good job
Anthony Murimi
Nice job
Ruth Diana
Nzuri kweli
Jonathan Ngua
Jamani wewe ni mwandishi bingwa
Flo Maua
Now when your setting is Lamu and the main theme is love....my all time favorite
Zig Fighter
How Azizi do that? Crazy love. I love the setting
Mwana Mwana
Hadithi nzuri kweli. Nimeipenda
Kun Chimerah
Lamu kisiwa chetu ila huyo Azizi tumemkana
Sasha Maina
9875. This is amazingly interesting
Kayla Ndubai
Your book is very interesting 🤔 it has a great story line and I love how the story ends congratulations.
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