by Naomi kimonye
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Young Masika watches her entire family and village massacred. She gets traumatized. She uses athletics to get over the horrific ordeal.

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Martin Indongole
A story and we'll resonate story.
Simon Mwangi
A very touching story
Naomi kimonye
This is the best so far
Ndumba Ndumba
Your stories are amazing but this one l love it more. I found myself re-reading
Daniel Mbugua
I pity Masika....
Ann Murea
The best read ever
Daniel Ndiva
I love the story
Ann Muthoni
The reason why I have read all your stories!!! I love your creativity.
Arumba Hakim
This is a sad state!!! A lesson to our leaders and sportsmen all over the world.
Samuel Bachiko
The story has some reality.... It's so touching.
Kaila Mwakusema
We need more of such stories!!! I love it.
Jackline Kiarie
What a well presented story!!!
Kathleeen Kasuvu
I love how creative you are... I have to read all your stories.
Korot Kevin
A story worth reading several times.
Ephraim Maloba
I like it
Jackline Njeri
It is a good story to read.
Simon Mbugua
Good work
Lucy Wanjiku
Bloody Medal!!!!
Nancy Wambui
I like the story
Ann Wambui
Naomi, you are really talented in making a person stick to reading your stories. This is a story on another level.
Tumusiime Patrick
I like it
Susan Kamau
This is one of the best short stories I have ever read
Shilah Khandiye
This is a very good story
Ruth Njeri
Keep writing such stories.
Hemistone Oruko
Good work
Okumu Khalifan
The story tells it all !!!!
Hassan Mtaita
I like it
Elias Mugambi
Very good presentation
Simon Kiarie
Good job Naomi.
Nicholas Nicholas
Hongera
Douglas Douglas
What an interesting read! Keep it up
Erastus Kirimi
Kudos
Danson Mutwiri
So sad
Nancy Munyi
So painful 😢
Ngaruthi Simon
May God bless the work of your hands
Mary Murithi
Wonderful narrative
eric kirimi
you are talented
gitonga muriithi
I really like the story
Henry Kimathi
I love the story
Joy Kanyua
Waiting for more of such stories from you Naomi.
Doris Makena
Another one from Naomi!! I like your creativity
ann kimonye
Wow!!!!
Yvette kathambi
I really love the story. It isn't a one time read.
Craig Oteyo
This is a good story
Nkatha Mwari
Wonderful
John Ledunda
A sad story of our sportsmen and women!!
nyongesa Mary
A very well narrated story
Irene Juma
Wow!!
Irene Onyango
It is a five * story
irene irene
loving this
mercy ngetich
a sad interesting story
chep jep
and we have many Masika's in africa
njoki carol
banana republic
dianne wanjala
we should change. good work
patience dw
Wow, what a story
ouma knight
i agree, athletics is a therapy
bro loringa
a good read
wanyama henry
a sad beautiful read
mary wambui
nice
jimmy bogonko
my best story so far
jim mbogo
keep it up Naomi
josse ngumo
kudos
theuri mwangi
this story should be read widely
isaac thui
love it love it
shirleen james
very beautifully written
patric gichuru
well written
mary kendi
you never disappoint
phylis kanana
your stories are the best
ema ema
amazing writer you are
ann karue
congrats gal
clara wanjiku
with this kind of writing, you are going far
millicent mungai
you are a good writer
mary wanjiku
we need somebody to tell such stories
gichuru gichuru
its what is happening.
mary karwitha
a good red
niko okawa
i am not much of a reader but i loved reading this
wilson kosiom
hi naomi. please keep on writing
francis oywer
excellent
maurice njuguna
amazing
mourice gik
good Naomi
Loise Nyawira
The best short story I have read so far.
Eunice Wambui
Wow. What a great story!
Abdi Hulufo
Love it
Millie Mungai
A painful experience from Masika
John Muthee
Well written. All the best
Karoki Simon
The real reflection of Africa
Theuri Muthee
Good job
Sigika Sigika
A test of Patriotism.. very hard
Brose Zawadi
I loved it
Matilda Gakii
This story should be read widely
Sarah Ciku
This is he truth in most of our hearts!!!
Tur Mall
L really love your creativity
Ciku Mbugua
Very painful experience
Reasearc Gaze
Already doing a research on this. It so beautiful
Musimo Ghati
The best story I have read
Nyandimo Wendy
Good job Naomi. i really hope this opens doors for you
Patience Musyoka
It's a great piece.keep it up.
Faith Njeri
An interesting story....
Mercy Njagi
I thought you were only good as a Swahili writer, but you're better in this foreign language
Beatrice Ndiangui
A good story to read.
beatrice ndiang'ui
keep it up
julius muthomi
wow! i love it
Samuel Kuria
Proud of your work. Good read
Pauline Eangechi
A very good read.
Nathan Nandi
A painful truth
Heshi Macharia
Great piece
Brian Maina
I like your creativity Naomi
Wesley Lumula
Good job
Isaac Wandati
I love this
Gracious Benjamin
Well written
Millicent Anyango
Good job Naomi
abel furaha
Well done
Ashton Mwiru
Africa!!!!
Kevin Githomo
Good work
James Komen
This is the pain with most of African Athletes.
Trevor Sonkole
Best read so far
Daniel Leakey
This is Africa and African culture.
Mugambi Kithinji
Nothing as bad as war, at any level
Richard Mugweru
I'm carried by this story
Samuel Mutinda
The best way to bring into limelight a painful truth.
Nathan Maina
A story to read several times
Ann Njoroge
Good
Deborah Wema
Not the best experience for a patriotic citizen
Fadhili Njenga
Good job
Alex Nyamu
A good story
David Kipkulei
What a story!!
Brandon Mecker
Very touching
Brandon Musyoka
It's a painful experience. Good work
Xavier Kimani
I will have to read all your stories. A very touching one here.
Joseph Mutua
I like the level of creativity
Joe Mbagi
Masika had a very bad experience
Myles mark
Very Creative
Alvin Mwangi
Good
Jordan Makau
Good
Peter Kairu
A good read
jane eunice
you are a good writer naomi. never give up.
Mathew Maganjo
I love the story
Ryan Onkoba
I like the suspense at the end
Edwin Mbugua
Great
Mark Kinuthia
I love the ending. I didn't expect it to happen this way.
Yassin Lekorore
WHAT A SAD STATE
Ramah Shaban
Very Sad!!!!!!
Njihia Muranga
Good job
Calvin Luther
Painful
Hamid Kalebi
Sad!
Andrew Mwangi
Good story
Erick Lemayan
A good story to read
joyce kanyiri
This is.....splendid.....🌹 congratulations
Agnes Wambui
Creatively brought out...Well done
Nyawira Sharon
Worth reading ❣️
Jeff Ethan
Amazing
Chemchem Chemchem
Good job
Wangari Easter
Nice
Hemed Muhammad
Great piece
Mogereg Mutwiri
Wow. Amazing
Ruth Diana
Great work
Jonathan Ngua
Wow. Your story is great. But Masika suffered alot
Flo Maua
This is my favorite. Too bad that we keep on fighting over land issues
Zig Fighter
The best I have read
Kun Chimerah
Well written
Joy Kamau
We should be kind ,because Mr Okura helped her