The Shrine
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by Naomi kimonye
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The Priest takes advantage of his innocent and naive congregation for his own gains. He uses social media and other means to acquire information about his followers which he turns the information later to a 'prophesy'. However, it does not take long...

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Simon Mwangi
Superb. The story is a true reflection of some church leaders in Africa who own the church and indoctrinate the congregation to believe in everything they say. Kudos Naomi
Vincent Chweya
Where is the lie in this story. I can't wait for you to write more. Fine work Bi Kimonye.
Hazel Kay
A good read!
Rose Muriuki
A great read. Kudos.
Naomi kimonye
☺️
Patience Musyoka
Good job dear.
Esther Kagendo
It's interesting
DAVID ODIMA
A great article here. Congratulations
Simon Kiarie
The best short read so far
Nicholas Nicholas
A very good story to read.
James Nguta
A very good story. keep it up
Philip Otieno
A very exciting story.
Modgen Chisia
What a story! A beautiful read! I highly recommend this to any discerning reader of fiction!
Daniel Waweru
I love the ending
Martin Indongole
A good story indeed
Lihanda Gerald
Wow! What amazing story
Faith Njeri
A very interesting story.
GRACE MACHARIA
What a read ...I could relate oh so well...especially having been a victim of spiritual swindlers 😋...Great work
Jeff Ethan
A very interesting story
Herbert Mosioma
Kazi bora
Margaret Gichu
Great work.
George King'ori
The story really shows the state of our society.
John Kamau
A really good story. The church must be aware of such senariors.
Beth Muthoni
Good job Naomi
Rhosa Nyaga
A good story Naomi, very interesting
Maureen wairimu Kiragu
Good story and relevant to what is happening to our churches.its an eye opener.
Peter Kimani
Good work
mary kendi
We need more of such, These is a great piece, You are talented Naomi.. Soo inspiring..
Bonface Nyamweya
👌👌👌
Jacquline Mwangi
Very thrilling story, keep up girl
Highly Favoured
Congratulations gal. May God give you more stories to write.
Mary Murithi
Very intriguing
Nyakio Wachira
I love the ending
judy Christine
Wow
Jackline Njeri
What a creative piece!!!
Jackline Kiarie
I love the story
Ann Wambui
A good one
Nancy Wambui
Very exciting story
Lucy Kiarie
Very creative. Enjoyed every bit of this good read.
Daniel Ndiva
I like the story
Kathleeen Kasuvu
Very creative
Ann Muthoni
Congratulations my daughter.... We're proud of you
Susan Kamau
Go go girl..... This is so true of our society
Ephraim Maloba
I love it
Elias Mugambi
This is such a creative work!!!
Samuel Bachiko
Good work
Okumu Khalifan
Good job
Kaila Mwakusema
I need more of such creative works
Arumba Hakim
Good work here
Hassan Mtaita
The Shrine!!!!!! So true
Korot Kevin
Good job!!!
ann kimonye
Good job naomi
Hemistone Oruko
wonderful work
Shilah Khandiye
I love the story
Tumusiime Patrick
All the way from Uganda. This is the true community that we have today!!!
Ann Murea
Very well presented!!! I like it
Henry Kimathi
Good story
Joy Kanyua
I love the ending
julius muthomi
what a twist
phylis kanana
what an ending. should i laugh or cry?
ema ema
cant stop rereading
clara wanjiku
the ending.....so perfect
Esbon Njau
Very creative
Ndumba Ndumba
Best story ever
Pascal Wambua
Interesting
Simon Kinyanjui
Wow! What a twist at the end.
Yvette kathambi
i cant boast to be a reader, but this one is mind blowing.
Craig Oteyo
Now that’s what I call a fine job.
darq amber
very well illustrated turn of events
Immaculate Mithamo
awesome....waiting for more
Cynthia Mirio
Nice story waiting to read more
rossy vibes
this is one of the well written stories i have read
Lynnette Wairimu
Perfect
Martha Mwai
Nice out view of the story
mburu patricia
I love your work...waiting for more
monicah njoroge
nice plot that left me in suspense all through
millicent mugo
hits the target
NAOMI kimondo
A GOOD READ
Hellen Ndirangu
The story keeps my eyes fixed . So fascinating
purity mungai
Keep up the good work
Tracey Mathenge
loved it!!! it was interesting, enjoyable and more.......
Blessing Maina
love the story
jerky nikki
fabulous book i love the twist
grace njoki
i love this
Agnes Wambui
What an amazing story
esther vibes
what an amaizing story...
terry shexy
what a story
lissa nyash
such an intresting story loved it
Liz Mwaa
good job nice one
christine wairigia
lots of love
sylvia wachira
well done keep it up
Simon Mwangi kiama
so awesome can't take my eyes of it
susan nyambu
this is amazing
peris muriithi
nice one
tiffany steph
i loved it wow
sharon nyawira
kudos!!!!!!!!!!!thumbs up ilove the story
Joy Wambui
I love it
Morris Mutahi
Good one
Lucy Wanjiku
I love the ending
Simon Mbugua
Superb!!!!
Ruth Njeri
'The Shrine'... Very well presented
Thomas Mbugua
It should reach all religious leaders who have this kind of behavior!!!!
Daniel Mbugua
I like it
Douglas Douglas
Best read ever
Erastus Kirimi
This is officially my best read
Danson Mutwiri
I salute you
Nancy Munyi
Nice one
Ngaruthi Simon
Keep it up
eric kirimi
i pity the congregation
gitonga muriithi
Thank for such a wonderful story.
Doris Makena
A good read
Nkatha Mwari
Good job.
John Ledunda
Good story
nyongesa Mary
Good job Naomi
Irene Juma
I love the story
irene irene
my best
mercy ngetich
well done
chep jep
when will religion stop being a business?
njoki carol
that Priest!
dianne wanjala
can i send this to a pastor i know?
patience dw
i love this one
ouma knight
i have to read once more
bro loringa
well written
wanyama henry
isn't there a law to regulate such....
mary wambui
excellent
jimmy bogonko
i love it
Jim Bo
Great story
jim mbogo
well done
josse ngumo
keep it up
theuri mwangi
so true. this is what is happening. i can relate
isaac thui
what an ending
shirleen james
what an ending? didn't expect that
patric gichuru
wow the ending
millicent mungai
this one i will read, reread and recommend
mary wanjiku
has somebody ever told you you are good writer?
gichuru gichuru
my best
mary karwitha
the ending surprised me
niko okawa
i needed such stories
wilson kosiom
wow naomi
francis oywer
amazing
maurice njuguna
amazing
mourice gik
keep it up Naomi
Loise Nyawira
Your stories are a must read
Eunice Wambui
Nice ending
Abdi Hulufo
That ending...wow
Millie Mungai
Love pains
John Muthee
Love the twist
Karoki Simon
Not untill one reads this story... It has opened my eyes
Theuri Muthee
Love the ending
Sigika Sigika
Should we have a special court for such religious leaders????
Brose Zawadi
Very creative
Matilda Gakii
My best
Sarah Ciku
A good one 😊
Ciku Mbugua
The Shrine... People are misusing it!!
Tur Mall
Wow! Its all I can say
Reasearc Gaze
Do some research on your religion and religious leaders to avoid such frustrations
Musimo Ghati
The ending surprised me
Nyandimo Wendy
I love your creativity
Mercy Njagi
We should get such people away from our churches. They are spoiling the good name
beatrice ndiang'ui
nice story
jane eunice
excellent. this is a classic
joyce kanyiri
Wonderful teacher....i love it
Chemchem Chemchem
👏🎉👏
Wangari Easter
Kudos
Hemed Muhammad
Heko
Farwat Said
Kazi mufti
Mogereg Mutwiri
Love it
Ruth Diana
Loved it
Jonathan Ngua
Wish I can meet this priest. Why have the churches been turned into business premises
Flo Maua
Just amazing. Go girl
Zig Fighter
Ua la kweli
Kelvin Gitonga
Good read

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